I think you coul have written a longer profile Ari. Your English level is much better than that. you deserve a B mark although I think you could easily have an A. Please correct the following mistakes.
Hi! My name is Ariadna and I'm 15. I dwell in Sant Esteve d'en Bas, it's a village near Olot. I live with my parents: Joan and Elisabet. My highschool is Bosc de la Coma, I have got -- very good friends there. I like goING out with theM, especially TO partIEs. I like reading, watching TV, surfing the net... I've got a hamster. ITS name is Chek;it isn't very friendly.
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My name is Ariadna and I'm 15. I dwell in Sant Esteve d'en Bas, it's a village near Olot. I live with my parents: Joan and Elisabet. My highschool is Bosc de la Coma, I have got very good friends there. I like going out with them, especially to parties. I like reading, watching TV, surfing the net...
I've got a hamster, its name is Chek, it isn't very friendly.
Kisses:)
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I think you coul have written a longer profile Ari. Your English level is much better than that. you deserve a B mark although I think you could easily have an A.
Please correct the following mistakes.
Hi! My name is Ariadna and I'm 15. I dwell in Sant Esteve d'en Bas, it's a village near Olot. I live with my parents: Joan and Elisabet. My highschool is Bosc de la Coma, I have got -- very good friends there. I like goING out with theM, especially TO partIEs. I like reading, watching TV, surfing the net... I've got a hamster. ITS name is Chek;it isn't very friendly.
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